New Novel - Once Upon A Thatcher Time

Once Upon A Thatcher Time.

People have asked me how long have I been writing and what motivated me to start. Well it goes back about twenty years now. I hated the Thatcher years and, as I saw it, the negative and illusionary philosophies that went with it. So I set out to write a novel highlighting all this.

It took me about 10 years writing in my lunchtimes, under the working title, The Innocent Legatee. A Financial thriller set in, and just after, the Thatcher years. A young man inherits shares in a vast national trading company and learning about the attitudes and values of their trading principles. But piece by piece he uncovers the grubby secrets of its founder, that the company is founded on criminality and drugs running. Just in time he also comes to defy all these unpleasant principles and confront those who perpetuate them.

Subsequently my published novels have been historical fiction, but this original manuscript has been gathering dust unpublished and unread. So last year I set about rewriting the story under the new title Once Upon A Thatcher Time.  I have also changed it from the third person narrative to a first person narrative.

The death of Mr.T. has motivated me to publish it direct to kindle/other E-reader formats, (no plans at this time to publish in paper form.)

If you want to read it, go to Smashwords.com. Smashwords is a multi e-reader platform; it will give you a choice of reading devices. Don't worry if you do not have kindle/e-reader, it can be read on desktop, laptop or tablet computers. Smashwords will tell you how to do it,

Did You Know?

I have now finished the 3rd rewrite to the third novel in my Georgian trilogy, working title "Ripples and Shadows." It has gone to my Copy Editor this week and now I look forwards to fighting (sorry working) with her about what stays and what goes. Jo is a history graduate so if I have any historical inaccuracies she will quickly tell me. She will also jump anything that she calls "authors voice" as she doesn't like that.

So the trilogy is nearing completion and I have been asking myself if I will return to the Georgian period in future novels and I don't really know. I seem to have been permanently researching the period for some years now, and perhaps I can share some of the information I have found out about the period, as a sort of, "Did You Know" session.

Let's see: Did you know:-

·        Swearing before women was considered a breach of good behaviour, but swearing other than that was, shall we say, somewhat picturesque. Such as - A plague on you sir – nay a pox. You shit barn door sir. I’ll piss on you sir. Damn you all for a set of sons of whores. The devil take the fellow. Mangy rascal. Scoffing braggart. There were worse ones but for the sake of modesty, well…

·        Not very many English people in the eighteenth century had fruit at all; only a very select, minuscule group of wealthy people had access to fruit. In the 1700s the British feared uncooked fruit; they thought it would give the person who consumed it indigestion or even the plague.

·        Meat made up a large portion of the diets of residents of eighteenth-century England

·        Prisons were profit-making enterprises. Nothing was free in prison. Food and lodging had to be paid for by the prisoner. There were fees for turning keys, fees for putting on of irons and fees for taking them off again. Even visitors had to pay fees.

·        Prisoners with a trade such as tailoring might continue to work and earn while in captivity, but many others were reduced to begging. A grille was built into the wall on the Farringdon street side of the Fleet prison, so that prisoners could beg alms from passers-by.

·        Bow Street Runners were known as Robin Red Breasts.

·        People's behaviour was at its worst in theaters. Drury Lane was wrecked six times in thirty years after the mobs rioted.

·        You could be hanged for one of three hundred offences.

·        Georgians were obsessed with protecting their property. Laws were generally passed to protect the rich and their property. Ergo burglary was punishable by death where theft was usually not.
·        Syphilis was called the French pox. Gonorrhoea was called the Senor.

·        The Prince Regent (the future George IV) was such a glutton he ate pigeon pie made with at least 3 pigeons, 6 steaks and eggs, for breakfast.  (The eggs were found inside the pigeons) all washed down with champagne. His health of course suffered and he became fat, and gouty.

·        Cheese came with cheese mites and maggots - and yes you ate both with the cheese.

Lastly my Copy Editor is Jo Field who lives in Devon. Despite fighting her she is brilliant and I happy to give her a plug here. You can contact her at jo.field3@btinternet.com

Understanding History.

I have just finished the first draft of my new novel, the 3rd in the trilogy about life in Georgian London told through the eyes of characters and their personal stories. It is now time for the first rewrite. As a preview however I am reproducing here the prologue to the novel, where the narrator outlines the difficulty of understanding our ancestors.

Prologue.

History is my passion. No first things first; my name is James Postlethwaite and I will be your narrator through this story and I am an historian - or is it - I am a historian; I never know. Let's get something out of the way to start with; yes I know, Postlethwaite is a bloody stupid name but it doesn't sound so bad in Rochdale where I come from where you can find Satterthwaites, Utterthwaites Olthwaites and other such names. Thwaite surnames by the way originate from an old Viking word for clearing, but then that’s just me being an historian again (or is a historian).

There's something you need to know about history. When you think you understand it, you probably don't. Look at it this way; if I try to explain when I live I can say I live in the present, or I could say I live in the now. If I wish to give this a more precise explanation I could say that I live in 1992, 2012 or 2022. But that in itself creates a problem in that the present immediately becomes the past. The now is transitory whereas the past is, well, is always the past.

But that in itself is a deception. If I try to tell anybody in the present, a story about the present, then although they may have a different view to me they still have, in the main, the same points of reference as I have. If they live in my country they will have gone through the same education process and watched the same television programmes, read the same newspapers.

To look back into history however you have to look back at a point in time or multiple points in time and in every one of these points the people will have a totally different set of references. These long dead people may be of the same nationality as me, or spoken the same language but in most other areas their reference points are different. These people did not behave like I behave, did not think as I think; they are not the same people. To understand them we have to be sensitive to the ripples that come down to us through times, look into the shadows of their stories.

Yet occasionally we get a real glimpse into these people's lives, how they lived, how they thought, the emotions that drove them; ordinary people speaking in their own words from across the centuries. Ok; let's start our story; I will narrate but I will let the two main characters speak for themselves.

The fictional Professor James Postlethwaite is keen that his readers do not think of these long dead characters as modern people - they are far from that. Perhaps I can also share the following piece of research by an actual real life historian that illustrates what he is trying to say.

Several years ago I was doing some research and looking at all the manorial document of one particular Hall ( took me years to persuade them to let me see the private records and papers) and I found a diary written by the lady of the house ( a Catholic and a family of high nobility at this time) which basically condemned a female servant for 'tempting' her brother on his visit to the Hall for which she was 'put out'....on further research with other ( external documents) I found her in the Workhouse 'with child'....at the age of 14 years.............something tells me that no 14 year old had controlled a 45 year old man...........on this childs baptism the vicar had wrote some very disturbing , sexist ( in today's standards) and very condemning notes in the parish book about this single mother with bastard child...harsh times, harsh words and the story was very sad....I later found the girls family was 'put out' of their home by the Hall.....so the whole family suffered.

So the lecherous brother defiles a fourteen-year-old servant, but it's the servant that suffers being condemned to the workhouse with her baby, and her family 'put out' of their tied home. If the home was tied the father also probably an estate worker and lost his job so the family would have faced starvation. Even more startling is that the local community in the guise of the vicar sees the fourteen year-old as the immoral one, the undeserving poor that does not deserve their sympathy. The words of the traditional song come to mind:

 It’s the same the whole world over,

It’s the poor what gets the pain,

It’s the rich what gets the pleasure,

Aint it all a bleedin' shame.

NB. I should be able to attribute this piece of research but in my own concept notes I failed to do so. That is my own error; my apologies to the historian. I hope he/she will forgive me.

An interview with Alan Dance

Those that know me know that I am a member of a writers group, a smashing group of people at NewwritersUK. Last year at Newwriters I met a fellow historical novelist, Alan Dance. I thought it would be interesting to do an on-line interview with him to see how he approaches his own writing.

Here it is - see what you think.

Q1. Historical fiction - why did you choose this genre and not some other?

I chose historical fiction primarily because I have always had an interest in history, particularly the history of Nottingham, where I live. I believe that one should stick to writing what one knows about. I could not, for example, write horror or fantasy, although I wouldn’t mind trying crime at some stage. My first book was actually a non-fiction local history book, published in 1998. Following the success of this, I thought I would like to try my hand at writing fiction, and there is just so much of Nottingham’s past that is crying out to be used as the basis for a novel that I decided to give it a go. Both Narrow Marsh and Leen Times, whilst having totally fictitious plots, also include many real events of the time woven into the story.

Q2. What period in history do you prefer? Are there any others you would like to move on to?

Roughly the period of the industrial revolution; about 1750 – 1850. This period saw the massive transformation of Britain from an agricultural to an industrial nation, when there were so many changes taking place, especially in the early 19th century, which affected the lives of everybody. This must have been a fascinating time to have been alive, but not a particularly pleasant one if you were poor, as most of the population was. There are other periods of history that also interest me (the English Civil War period, for example) but for now I shall stick to the late 18th / early 19th centuries.

Q3. Research. Where do you do this? What sources do you use?

I already had quite a reasonable knowledge of the events that form a background to my books, but I am always careful to check things out where necessary. I use a combination of the traditional sources (books and historical documents), along with the internet. However, don’t believe everything you read, especially on the internet!

Q4. Do you map out all the story line before you start and stick to it?

My first novel was Narrow Marsh. I knew I wanted to write about life in Nottingham in the early 19th century, centered on the framework knitters. I knew exactly how the first chapter would pan out, but beyond that really had no idea of exactly how the plot would develop, other than that the story had to reflect the struggle for survival amongst the poor of Nottingham, amid the massive social changes then taking place. But once I started writing, the ideas began to flow and the plot soon took shape.

However, with Leen Times, the sequel to Narrow Marsh, it was different. After Narrow Marsh was finished, but before it had been published, I had already formulated the plot in some detail, to be used if Narrow Marsh was a success. It actually came to me one day and took no more than about 15 minutes to jot down. Once I started to write Leen Times, I stuck to the basic plot, but did adapt it a little as I wrote, adding to it and, I hope, improving it.

Q5. What do find the most difficult the most challenging part of writing?

Getting going! That is, actually starting the book, and then, on a daily basis whilst writing it. I think one has to be in the mood to write, and it is no good wasting time if one is not. I find that provided I feel keen to write, far more gets done than trying, for example, to set a target of so many words each day and sticking rigidly to that target. Other writers, of course, might work totally differently.

Q6. What are you working on at the moment?

I am currently writing another historical novel, not a sequel to the first two. This one is set in both Yorkshire and Nottinghamshire during the mid-nineteenth century, and is loosely based (with suitable embellishments, of course) on some real events in my own family history. It’s quite an intriguing story, related to me by older relatives. Surprisingly, much of what I was told has turned out to be true, unlike so many family legends one hears.

Now on E-Books

Just wanted to let you know that my books, [No Quarter Asked and A Canopy of Stars], have now been published as multi-format ebooks by Smashwords. As many of you know, the books are historical fiction set the London in the Georgian era.

 I hope you’ll take time to check it out at Smashwords, where you can sample the first 20% of the books for free.

Here’s the link to my author profile: [http://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/silverfox77]

Here’s the direct link to my book pages, where you can sample or

purchase the book:s

Canopy of Stars - http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/122376

No Quarter Asked No Quarter Given - http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/124253

Won’t you also take a moment to spread the word about my book to everyone you know?

Thank you so much for your support!

How do I write?

People have asked me - How do I write? Well I’m sure that every writer has his own way of writing and I am no different.  For those who are interested here is my two-pennyworth.

Momentum is the important thing for me – it is the key. Sometimes this is just not there and every word seems to need extracting like some precious ore chiselled from the ground. When the momentum is there however I do everything I can to keep it going. This is where the asterisk (*) comes in. Anything that I write that needs verification or more research gets an asterisk (*). I then have to return to these (*) at a later date. For me it is about – keep writing. Rewriting and editing come later.

I use a word document that remains open every time I sit at my laptop. This contains the current chapter that I am working on. At the same time however I have a number of other word documents open – this keeps everything I need to hand to maintain that momentum.

• A document entitled – Research/name of the novel.  This contains my original conceptual notes for the novel. Added to this is any further research that I have undertaken, and this is often very extensive. These research notes are added to as the book develops; a story line or back-story may open up to me and require further research.
• A document entitled General Notes. This contains writing style prompts, built up over the years and under subheadings; e.g.

1.      1.      Descriptions: e.g. a hard wicked face, blue-jowlled, craggy, long chiselled cheeks, inexorable eyes. Wore his hair long. Silver-tongued, an anaemic look, pale blue eyes took your full attention so that you gaze never dwelt on anything but them.

2. Conversation i.e. the ways people talk. e.g. Sniffed, grunted, grumbled, groaned, mumbled, griped, murmured, rumbled, screeched, squealed, cried, screamed, enquired.

3. Word sounds. E.g. Ah, Argh, Mmm, Err, Erm, Huh, Ugh, Oy.

4. Phrases. e.g. His eyes gave a flash of anger. He felt himself shiver, but his eyes told a different story, He felt that he was being torn apart, He darted a look.

• A document entitled Authors Notes – these will eventually be printed t the end of the story as part of the published book. This starts out as a blank document for each novel but I enter anything that the reader may want to know that I deemed unnecessary to include in the narrative or would stand as ‘authors voice,’ if my character would not say them. E.g. Up to 1837, a marriage ceremony was required to be performed in a consecrated building. Julia and David would not have been allowed to have been married in the gaol therefore. This inaccuracy has been allowed for dramatic affect.

• A document entitled Punctuation.  This contains a brief of common punctuation uses, apostrophes, commas, colons and semi colons, hyphens, brackets etc

• Finally I have a prompt at all times, immediately below the line I am typing the story on. This is constantly in my eye-line so that I don’t deviate from what I am trying to do. It says the following:

        THINK – HEAR - SMELL – TOUCH – SEE – TASTE

        Open with big question or hook/INTRIGUE.
       Then you have the problems your hero is up against/ CONFLICT.
       That builds to the CLIMAX.
       Followed by the RESOLUTION

Spooky.

As readers of this blog will know my novel, No Quarter Asked No Quarter Given, is loosely based on the events in the life of Daniel Mendoza; he was the inspiration behind the story to be told. Mendoza himself was such a complex character, so in developing the story, I split his character into two separate people, one the honourable pugilist Samuel Medina, and the other the roguish Captain John Campbell-John.

The reason for using the character Samuel Medina was that I could not know, from this distance in time, what sort of man Mendoza really was. It was relatively easy to research about his exploits but the man himself; well that’s a different story. I did not want to attribute personal characteristics to Mendoza that were invented; what I was writing was an historical novel not a biography. So some of the main events in his life form a backdrop to the story but everything else is a fiction of the authors making.

So what did Mendoza look like? I had seen some facsimiles of him fighting but they were crude and showed little of his features. So I start with a blank canvass and could invent an appearance that I could put in my readers mind – here, this is what Samuel looks like. The first description of a teenage Samuel can be found in chapter 2 as described by Captain John Campbell-John as follows:

The lad had large brown eyes that were warm and compassionate. He wore his hair in a pigtail and his face was shaven in the style of an Englishman rather than wearing side ringlets and a beard in the style of his father. His general countenance reflected his kind-heartedness, his olive skin and aquiline nose being softened by two great soulful eyes. He had one of those faces which, while not handsome, was warm and encouraging; the kind of face that attracted the fairer sex.

When the book was ready for publication I was asked by the cover designer, Paddy Brennan, if I had found any images that could form part of the design. I took to the Internet again, for images of the 18^th century pugilist and spent many hours searching various sites. But then a strange thing happened – I came upon a portrait of Mendoza as a young man. This was not the pugilist Mendoza but a head and shoulders portrait.

This was spooky – the image that I had drawn for my readers was, I had thought, purely factious. But here was the man I had invented smiling out at me from two centuries ago and he is exactly as I had described him.

See what you think from the image attached. Is that spooky or what?

If you agree, send me a comment.